Your character animation is better than it has ever been, and the improvement is very impressive. The storyline is fun and I can see where it is going. The problems I had was with the background music which was EXTREMELY distracting at some points and took me out of it (some scenes don't need background music), the pacing and comedic timing could have also been better. And the background art didn't mesh very well with the characters, except at the last scene. So if you could do the background of everything like the one in the last scene, things will be much better in my opinion ( or just work with someone who specializes in background art ). Anyway it was a good job overall, my main grip was with that over arching music which felt extremely odd and didn't blend well with what as going on in the scenes ( or just work with someone who specializes in audio design ).
the last scene was that way as an experiment- i wanted to see what it would look like that way. That was pure 2D character on a 3D background. Since it looks pretty good I might try it in GPS or some other projects
Hum, i like it. looks very ambitious. I have no idea how hard it is but it would be great it their hair moved a little, especially when she is flying on her weed whacker.
i have to learn how to do that without the model taking a crap
The animation was pretty good and i enjoyed the voice acting. But the Dragon Ball theme song was way too distracting and it really took me out of the whole experience, you could use some more work with the audio. The visual gags were good, but it was not accompanied by good audio in order to make the humor more noticeable. Also lip sync was a little off at some points. You might want to try and make more mouth shapes instead of a constant opening and closing loop.
Positive: Better animation, great voice acting, pretty decent story telling and humor
Negative: The audio, the lip sync, the timing.
Taste like movie 43, but way more tasteful.
So, they are poor but they can afford a house with a swimming pool?
For some reason this reminded me of spirited away.
FUCKIN YES!. This looked great and was a huge improvement for episode 1. I like the music and the visual gags. Well executed. Btw the voice actor for ada did an amazing job. You know what? this is by far you best work. Oh and the fight scene was really good. BTW Great job on them clouds, i wasnt expecting that. 5 stars for you.
Lol, i see where you are coming from with this. I love the backgrounds, and the animation.
I am so jealous of this due. I would love to have a space walrus
KELLZIES!!!! Great, it is much better now, ummm you clearly put alot of effort into this. 5 stars for you.There is just one thing, there is one frame ( a sketch) that you forgot to remove at the transformation scene, somewhere around 3:09.
Your animation skills have improved greatly , cant wait to see the next one.
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